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Lol that was amazing.Alia looked sexy and hot.That was mostly because of the way you draw her.It was amazing..It was like 3d like when she turned back and so...But the idea is..priceless...Omg..I was wodnering why alia suddenly got kinky and who were she preapearing the video for. xDDD
Oh my god Aahahah it really was a good idea.Eevrything was well done.Alia posing in the front of mirror and the camera ,Alia sending the kiss on the cam , Alia taking pics of herself and then she turns out to be ....XDDDD I was like O.O when I first saw it though...

Haha though this is a long and pointless review it shows how much I liked the movie.This is definetly going in my favorites.And I havent favorited anything new for a long time.

It was also a good idea to have alia in it.It wouldnt be interesting if I saw roll or sumthing else..You got originality there...lol loved it.As one flash artist to another ; Keep up the great work man

Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate reviewers who write more than just the generic LOL! It feels like it makes it all worthwhile. But to be sure, wouldn't depicting Roll in such a scenario qualify as child pornography? I wouldn't want the FBI to come crashing through my window.

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Score: 4

"Hmm"

submission: Naruto Bloopers Ep.4

date: February 19, 2007

Its been a while since I last reviewed.
I really cant vote a high score for this one.Because this is a flash portal and we have to review the submissions looking the authors flash skills.And it might also because I give high detail to my animations.
But dont worry.The humour was priceless.I really havent noticed almost all of them.I have watched the earlier episodes of this flash series of yours.And loved the humor in them too.Well keep making them.And I loved the fact that you started making this thing from the very beginning.I would of course love to see all of the naruto episodes' bloopers.
It has no flash skills.Even the preloaader and replay buttons werent working.My advise is to work on your flash skills more , you can easily make a working preloader.And there must be a free preloader here on NG.And making replay buttons arent that hard.Just put a button and give it the action ; "go to and play"..And dont forget to put that frame a "stop" action.
About the grapics it was just from naruto anime nothing special.
Style well..It didnt have any sPECÝAL style.
Sound...Its from naruto thats a good thing.You should also work on that a lil bit.
Violence..Well at times I was scared so yeah.
Interactivity.no not at all.
Humor : priceless
This can become better if you can actually make a working preloader and replay button.And at times I wasnt able to read the things on the screen because they went too fast.I had to stop the movie everytime a new scren appeared which pissed me off.You could slow the pace a bit.Or You can make the screenshots change by pressing space button.That would be a good idea really.Or just putting buttons to change the screenshots is also a good idea.
Overall Ill be looking forward to contination of this.Cant wait for more.Im only trying to help ya since I kinda liked this.I havent left a single review helping this much really.
You are really good at noticing little things and you have a good humor sense.
Thats about it...Wow...

Author's Response:

Wow, since you put alot of time in this review i should put alot of time in my awnser also.
I do not really mind that you dont vote high for this thing, you see its no Flash at all. (thats true)
I do not know how to translate some stuff from English to Dutch so that makes it harder.
Simple things like a easy preloader gets really hard if i cannot translate it, i need someone to show it to me from step to step in order to redo it and actually make it work.
About the sound, i figured out Naruto sound fits good with the flash and i might should slow it down a bit so you all can actually take the time for it to read.
Well about the violence it didn't mean to scare you =P.
Everyone noticed that i should make this preloader and the replay button to work, i've looked on some tutorials and i seems very easy. (The quater is just not falling yet >_>) I want to thank you for your advice and time to review my flash. Soon part 5 is done and i will post it tomarrow. Thanks for saying that i am really good at noticing the little details, but i shouldnt take full credits for that because my brother helped me out ALOT. Thanks for the Review and i might speak you some time later.
My Regards,

HyperRaider (phew thats a long awnser (>^_^)>.)